Bonjour,

Je suis actuellement en 3ème et j´ai fais ce week-end la lettre en motivation pour la classe européenne proposée pour l’année prochaine. Je ne savais pas en quelle langue il fallait la rédiger. Je remercie d’avance ceux qui auront la patience de la corriger :

Dear Sir, Dear Madam,

I am currently in 3ème (9th grade) ans I would like to integrate your European section for the next year. I would appreciate to join it to improve my level in English and reach a correct one in sight of trips and stages. Nowadays, English has become a basic and it’s a desadvantage not to be able to express oneself in this languag. The prospect of having a biology course also interested me since it’s my favourite course, and I would like to move towards a scientific career.

I think I have a good enough level in English since I am learning it for seven years now. I also try to read and watch movies in English to enrich my vocabulary as much as I can. I am aware of the additional workload this implies but I feel motivated enough to face it.

Please receive, Madam, Sir, my most distinguished greetings.

Bonjour,

Dear Sir, Dear Madam,

I am currently in 3ème (9th grade) and I would like to integrate your European section for the next year. I would appreciate to join it to improve my level in English and reach a correct one to take trips and internships. Nowadays, English has become a basic and it’s a disadvantage not being able to express ourself in this language. The prospect of having a biology course also interested me since it’s my favorite course, and I would like to move towards a scientific career.

Et le reste.

Voilà ce que je te propose, à noter que je ne fait pas figure de référence sur l'anglais.

C'est vraiment toi qui a fait cette lettre ? Ou DeepL / Google translate t'ont aidé ?