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Hi Amy
Your personal stationary will be available this Monday AFTERNOON instead of monday morning due to the post office strike. We apologize for the slight delay and we are doing our best to ensure that your product arrives as close to our initial expected time as possible. If you have any concerns, please feel free to contact us at anytime,
We would also like to thanks you for recommendng us to you’re colleagues.... It very much appreciated. we hope to work with u again in the futur. As a gesture of our appreciation, we would like to offer you a personal tour of our workshop as well as 20% off of your next purchase!!!!!!!!! Please don’t hesitate to get in touch should you recuire our services again, it would be our pleasure to continue working together.
Sam
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Dear Amy,
Your personal stationary will be available this Monday afternoon instead of Monday morning due to the post office strike. We apologize for the slight delay and we are doing our best to ensure that your product arrives as close to our initial expected time as possible. If you have any concerns, please feel free to contact us at any time.
We would also like to thank you for recommending us to your colleagues. It is very much appreciated and we hope to work with you again in the future. As a gesture of our appreciation, we would like to offer you a personal tour of our workshop as well as 20% off of your next purchase. Please don’t hesitate to get in touch should you require our services again. It would be our pleasure to continue working together.
Sam
